Choose a Particuler Brand for Children
You have been asked to recommend a pa rticula r br and of bread for use in elementa ry schools in a small city . Which of the four brands of bread described in the char t would you recommend ? Support your choice with information f rom the chart below .
Which br and of bread is the most s uit able for elementary school children ? Befor e we make the choice , ther e a re three things we need to take into account : tast e, nut rition and cost .
Among the thr ee , I believe nutrition is the most impor - tant . Childr en in elementary schools are at an age when their bodies a re growing rapidly . Malnut rition will cer tainly hinder their bodies f rom growing , and poor health will oft en r es ult in poor lea rning . Taste is also impor tant because tasty bread can help stimulate children’s appetite . Children will not like to eat poor- tasting bread r egardless of its level of nut rition . A good appetite gua rantees sufficient nutrition .
Therefore , I will cer tainly recommend Brand A, because both its nut rition and taste a re ve ry good .
Neithe r Brand C nor Brand D is a good choice because the former has a very good nutritional ra ting but not a good taste ; while the lat ter has an excellent taste but only a fair nut ritional rating .
Being les s nutritional and tasteful , Brand B is not as good a choice as Brand A, despite their similar costs . So , tha t leaves only Brand A . It is t rue that Brand A has the highest price , but I believe that most of the schools would not really mind paying a little bit mor e money for school childr en’s bet ter health .
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CET6六级作文结构分析：
· Which br and of bread to choose ?
* Three factors to be conside red: nut rition , taste and cost
· Nut rition as against taste
* A comparison
* Impor tance of nutrition
* Impor tance of taste
* Decision
· An analysis
* Br and C and Brand D
* Br and B
* Final choice — A
* Price — no problem
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CET6六级作文内容分析：
本文是一篇图表作文, 要求按图表中提示的信息为小学生选择一种牌子的面包。本题曾为一托福考题, 作者“ 借题发挥”根据自己的思路作文。这类题型的写作多用比较和对照, 这也是托福写作的一大特点。此外, 这类作文的结论不受限制, 完全 可按作者的意图来写, 但必须有充足的理由。本文中, 作者首先分述营养与口味两大因素并加以比较和权衡, 而价格则不在话下。四者相比后决定选A。然后在第三段中排除C 和D, 最后 A 和B 相比, 决定选择最好的。本文适合多种考试的应试者,以托福考生为最。
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CET6六级作文万能句型：
take . . . into account 考虑⋯⋯
at an age when . . . 在⋯⋯的年龄
malnut rition n . 营养不良
hinder v . 防止, 妨碍
regardles s of 不管, 不顾
despite prep . 尽管
It is true tha t . . . 诚然