CET6英语六级作文范文精讲99篇:079 Love Is Like a Lamp in Darkness爱就像黑暗中的一盏灯

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Love Is Like a Lamp in Darkness

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Love is the noblest of all the emotions of mankind . It is like a lamp tha t s hines in darknes s and gives people cour age , hope and life .

The pictur e reminds me of O .Henry’s famous s hor t story The Last Leaf , which described a young ar t girl with serious pneumonia, who , while watching the ivy vine was st ripped of its leaves by the cold autumn wind , felt so pessimistic and dist ressed tha t she thought with the fall of the last leaf her life would come to an end .

Surprisingly enough , the next morning , she found the last ivy leaf was still there , which again lit her hope of life . The story went on that the last leaf was , in fact , painted by an old ar tist who died of an acute at tack of pneumonia the moment he finished his maste rpiece . This story reveals that love can illuminate a person’s lifelong journey . Countles s daily happenings around us may serve as good examples to fur ther expound the topic of the picture .

Over seas Chinese cont ribute la rge s ums of money to“ Project Hope”to help children in rural a reas go back to school .

Middle school students regula rly help grandpar ents and disabled people with their housework .

College students donate blood pe riodically to hos pitals . Somebody with a fatal head injury and with no hope of recovery donated his kidney to a little girl .

War riors in white have saved thousands of SARS victims by sacrificing themselves .

The structur e of the Chinese char acte r ren“ 人” repr esents people’s mutual love and mutual support . So , peoples hould love and be loved , and I think if everyone gives out a lit tlelove , our world will become a beautiful ea r thly paradise .

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CET6六级作文结构分析:

· Thematic paragraph
* Love — noblest emotion
* Love — cour age , hope and life
·Examples for illust ration
* O .Henry’s The Last Lea f
*“ Project Hope”
* Middle school students
* College students
* Somebody’s cont ribution
* War riors in whit e
·Concluding pa ragr aph
* People’s mutual love and support
* Let the world be filled with love

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CET6六级作文内容分析:

本文是一道图画作文, 曾经是一道考研英语作文题。这里,作者借题撰文, 注入了新意, 内容深刻, 思路独特, 可供学习者 借鉴。第一段的两句就破题, 且统领全文。第二段以三句长句勾画出O·Henry 名著《最后一片叶子》的梗概和主题, 然后用一句承上启下, 又引出五个具体的例子说明爱心的种种表现。结尾段的两句“‘人’字的结构本来就是相互支撑”、“如果人人都献出一点爱, 整个世界将成为美丽的人间天堂”, 更是精彩。学习本文时可注意作者的构思以及长句的写法。

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CET6六级作文万能句型:

the noblest of all emotion s of mankind 人类所有感情中最崇高的
The Last Lea f 美国作家O . Henry 的短篇小说名
a r t girl 学艺术的女生
pneumonia n . 肺炎
ivy vine 常春藤
be st ripped of its leaves by the cold autumn wind 寒冷的秋风剥去了它的叶子
with the fall of the last leaf he r life would come to an end随着最后一片叶子的掉落, 她的生命将到尽头
s urprisingly enough 特别令人吃惊的是
lit her hope of life 燃起了她生的希望
died of an acute attack of pneumonia 死于肺炎的急性发作
the moment conj . = as soon as 或immediately after
masterpiece n . 杰作
illumina te v . 照亮
expound v . 说明
ove rseas Chinese 华侨
rural ar eas 农村
regula rly ad . 经常
disabled people 残疾人
donate blood periodically 定期献血
somebody with a fatal head injury 有人头部受了致命伤




 

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